A bit boring. You've got to combine the science better with the writing. The writing isn't combining the basic science with the story so it's all flat. The kids in the story don't act human. Kinda caricatures. I'm sure you got a story, but it's not clear in this what you are writing about and not enough interesting stuff is happening. Good luck! Btw, the website is okay, I've been searching for examples of how do do mine, I can do a basic site like this. Thanks for that inspiration. OMG I really disagree with your reviews of books. Don't know what you expect and to be honest, I don't think you can do better. Some of the books you put down are AMAZING. How would you advertise this place, anyway? I'm like one of two people to come here. How do you advertise a website. Got to figure this out. The professional writers have great sites, but they pay for those. I can't afford that. Again, good luck!